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The moon once saved me by nganlamsong The moon once saved me by nganlamsong
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Dear my little brother,

I've just received a message from mom telling me that you will be 11 in the next month and you are growing so fast, you are so mischievous. I'm really happy to hear that! You remind me of something when I was a little mischievous kid and I'm really want to tell it to you :)

There was an abandoned house near our house, well, it's not there anymore because everyone decided to unload it because of some bad rumours. Mom told me that I shouldn't come near that house, there are some weird chuckles and sounds in that house every late night. Me and Pichou decided to discover the house for ourselves when our parents slept and would told them how brave I was in the next morning, and that's one of the worst decisions I ever made!

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The only light in that house was the little moonlit in the floor, me and Pichou sat under the light, tremulous hugging each other, we've started to cry, hope that those scary things would be afraid of the moonlight and would go away and...it's worked, those things ended up shrieked and faded away, I believed that the moonlight is the magic that saved us!

Well, I and Pichou (oh, he is a Raichu now) still feel a little scared everytime we remember that moment. So, I hope that you will obey our parents and be a good boy, I'll have a big surprise for you as a gift for your next birthday when I return home!

Miss u so much,
Mary

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:iconjulian0123:
julian0123 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Incredible picture :D
Well, Darkrai and Cresselia symbolize the phases of the moon, so this is fitting in a way...
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SonicShell25 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
They also possess the powers to control their dreams, as well. Darkrai with nightmare powers and Cresselia with dream powers.
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julian0123 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
True.
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AniBastion Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016
Darkrai is the NIGHT 
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, he is! :D
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JoeMerl Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016  Student Writer
Nice work!
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you! :)
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JoeMerl Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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flamingcreepsunlimit Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016
All hail Jeff!
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XStreamChaosOfficial Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMFG DA FEELZ! THIS IS AMAZING! ;^;
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eclipse4d Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016   Digital Artist
Really Cool.
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank so much! :D
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eclipse4d Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016   Digital Artist
Thanks for sharing :)
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DarkArtist491 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Darkrai is my favorite Pokémon
He has that heroic side to him that no one sees and really does care for people
I love this!
It's really good!
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is always my favorite pokemon :)
He has good design, good mystery flashback story, a calm character...a cool one!

Thanks! :)
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DarkArtist491 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
A fantastic drawing! an excellent work on this!
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank so much, pal! You always there in every of my arts! Hug 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016
Your welcome! Continue to work hard alright? Your artwork is pretty amazing thats why you see a lot of comments from me^^
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dinoking007 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016
A great heroic use of the nightmare Pokemon darkrai
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :D
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hello6789 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016
"Mistakes were made" the picture. Poor Ghastly, Haunter and Gengar
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They have overdone their fun! :D
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Anonymousxp-ff Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016
Awesome story! :D, as for the grammar (sorry if I sound like the typical grammar police buuut it could help you in the future): 

"I and Pichou" it could be written as "Pichu and I" or "Me and Pichu"

"I and Pichou decided to discovered the house by ourself" The verb see should be used instead of discover as discover is used when finding something new and since there were rumors about the house it means that people already knew about it. And since it's plural because of pichu and the girl it should be ourselves, and use for instead of by.

"and would told them how brave I am" instead of told it should be tell, and "I am" could be "I was." or "Had been."

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there are some weird chuckle and sounds in that house every late night."  Since the girl is talking about past events instead of are it's were and the verb chuckle should be in plural 'chuckles' like sounds.

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and that's the most regretful thing I ever do!" well here it could be said as one of these options "And that's something I'll always regret"
"It was one of the worst decisions I ever made." or like it should have been said "And that's the most regretful thing I've ever done."

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The only light in that house was the little moonlight "  moonlight refers to the light itself and the place the moonlight is lighting is called 'Moonlit' 

Anyway that's all I've found hope this helped, and again sorry if I seemed like a grammar cop to you, keep up your awesome art ;P
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I corrected them.

I don't mind if someone is telling me wrong, that's how we grow!

thank you :hug:
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Kuixotic Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cool!!I love the choices of colors you used,great job!!! :D
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nganlamsong Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, they took me hours to choose which ones to use! :D
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